Feeble Poem by Meghan S.E Newton

Feeble

Rating: 5.0


A plethora of teeth and happiness erupts explosively from your face,
Concealing ever so effectively, the struggle of your grace,
Inside your soul the foundations are withering away,
An inevitable downfall that effects you each and every day,
A strong statuette of wisdom and wit is how you appear,
But feeble and insignificant is how you really feel,
Narcotics that promise eternal creative stimulation,
Are an incentive for you to continue daily waking,
Battling feelings of feebleness is what they supply,
The world becomes a canvas under the blue stained sky,
But this inspiration is only present for a limited period of time.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Started a project which entailed opening a dictionary and creating poetry (whether it's good or not is open to question) from the first word I landed on. My previous poem 'Princess' is another example of this project. But naebody's reading this anyway so aye.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meghan Newton 14 October 2012

Thank you! I appreciate the positive feedback and the knowledge that someone is actually reading my poems :) Glad you enjoyed.

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Maryelle Anthony 12 October 2012

This is one of the poems that caught me with it's first two words. The verse about inspiration is more than true, the poem as such is short but brilliant.

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