Feed The Fish Poem by Amberrrr gordon

Feed The Fish

Rating: 4.0


It's so boring in this tank
back and forth all day long.
i stare out, they stare in.
will they feed me?
i think not!
Quickly there coming over, very slowly they give me my dinner.
im bloated now so turn out the light,
im going to sleep goodbye and goodnight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terence Nabbs 19 October 2009

hello amberrrr very funny I like funny poetry terry

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Obinna Eruchie 18 October 2009

How you painted a fish voicing out its boredom, and waiting to be fed. It is an interesting piece.

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