Feelings In Space Poem by moon guen joong

Feelings In Space

Rating: 5.0


Feelings are awesome world.
One smashing in mind.
Other slighting in cushion sadness.

In feeling some things.
Sea can soak you all.

Tree's little touch.
Cause you can sing sharpness.

Feelings dance when you sleep.
In dreams.
Space produce another twins of you.

At dot in space.
You only feel you are alone.

When you pitch small circle in space.
You feel infinite.

Sunday, June 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: mind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 18 June 2018

Moon, such a profound poem...10++++

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Moon Guen Joong 18 June 2018

So, thanks for your praise

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