Fence Poem by Puspanjali Sahu

Fence

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Some wires full of thrones
Some cement filled pillars
full of small but sharp stones
Or
Some pieces of wood and some pieces of rope
embracing each other so deeply
See
are standing in front of us
as gallant warriors
and decide
Our boundary!
Our limitations!

Do not know
from where they gained such strength
Stop thinking of crossing them
You even can not touch
Neither strong waves of a roaring ocean
Nor deep red flames of fire
Nothing can threaten their existence

May be because
their germination started
back...long back
From deep...very deep
inside our heart

Now we can not see
standing on this side of fence
sky of the other side
Can not spread our hand
with closed eyes
and feel the morning fog
Because
Heart, that defines us
started deceiving
feeling of trust

Tuesday, April 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: complain,feel
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
few people smiles straight from their heart in spite of having dozens of problems and i feel like living in a pure. innocent world

This poem is dedicated to all of them
Let's try to dedicate this to ourselves
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 06 February 2017

An insightful depiction of the fortress erected by a conglomeration of sinister shadows- without substance, whose sole purpose is the limitation of man's mind. Beautiful and motivational poem. Thanks for sharing Puspanjali.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 April 2016

Now we can not see standing on this side of fence sky of the other side Can not spread our hand with closed eyes and feel the morning fog Because Heart, that defines us started deceiving feeling of trust Yes dear poet.. Very few in this world can accomplish such difficult tasks..to smile under adverse conditions. Yet you see the hope. Thanks for sharing it. A perfect 10 for it. Subhas

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Halin Roche 26 April 2016

excellent poetry pushpanjali... n yes indeed u r correct... only few in this world smile in spite of problems...

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Puspanjali Sahu 02 May 2016

Thanks for your encouraging words

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