Fiery Promises Poem by Laura arwen

Fiery Promises



They should be
easy to maintain
They deceive people
for their weaknesses
I think they
aren't reliable because
their nature is
controversial
The only promise
I require for
my future is
the deep loneliness
For some people
they are indispensable
I think they
are dead because
they are wrong
and weak
I live better
without promises
Some promises are
big lies
I can't make
promises because they
are unsuccessful for
my lifestyle
They are a
big failure for
my nature
They give false
hope sand use
our weak defenses
Sometimes I think
they are without
sense
For someone they
could be a
terrible betrayal
I don't see
the positivity on
making promises
They are a
way to cheat
also to get
happiness
They complicate the
life

Thursday, May 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: thinking
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 14 May 2020

If promises ae made to be broken, they should not be made in the first place. Otherwise, promises intended to be kept are okay, even if they happen to be unkeepable at a later stage for any unavoidable reason. A promise may render immediate support and strength to a person to whom it is made. But utmost efforts must always be made to keep a promise, and if broken, compensation offered.

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