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Ashley Seymour

(03-06-1985 / Michigan USA)

Finding Ashley


There was a girl that I knew well,
And where she went I can not tell,
A bright face and humor great,
I loved her every trait,
Though I paid her no attention,
I’d buy her back at any pention,
I’ve looked for her everywhere,
That eight year old without a care,
Now I’m lonely and going astray,
I guess she felt hated and just ran away,
Someone said they saw her grin, from
Somewhere deep within,
Then I new,
What I had to do,
And through my tears and all of my fears,
I stood the storm of life,
Even through the pain and strife,
And when I looked at my reflection,
I saw that girl and her effection,
It was hard but now I see,
That blond haired blue eyed girl was me,
Spirit Broken but not gone,
I had another chance to make her strong,
Even if the journey is long,
We are friends until the end,
And she is not the same,
Now I’ve given her a name,
Still a girl shining like a pearl,
I love her,
And she loves me,
And together we make Ashley

Submitted: Friday, September 15, 2006
Edited: Wednesday, September 15, 2010

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  • Shekhar Joshi (11/21/2009 2:00:00 AM)

    Thats an excellent poem Ashley.....loved your way of presenting.......Very good work......... ;)

    and hey u have a typo in there.........it should be Knew.....not new.... :) (Report) Reply

  • Philip Housiaux (1/30/2008 12:42:00 PM)

    Beautiful poetry. Reading your attached biography I feel that you may well
    have insights that others miss out on. Anyway you write lovely thoughts in verse. Keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Philip Housiaux (1/30/2008 12:42:00 PM)

    Beautiful poetry. Reading your attached biography I feel that you may well
    have insights that others miss out on. Anyway you write lovely thoughts in verse. Keep it up. (Report) Reply

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