R.Benjamin Abate

Rookie - 159 Points (06/22/90 / Mattydale, NY)

First Kiss - Poem by R.Benjamin Abate

Rain falling on the car-
Hooligans at Houlihans-
First kiss.

Tender - Barely glazed the lips-
More of a peck
Like the birds' kiss
Like the rain saying 'Hello'

Chills rushing up
Our spines at the same time-
Angels twine us together
Like two raindrops crossing paths

But the cool feeling
Of swimming through the air
Wet - without a worry-
Telling each other our story

Wraps us in this present
Moment of perfection-
Drowning in the monsoon
Too soon.

Comments about First Kiss by R.Benjamin Abate

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/23/2013 6:23:00 PM)

    Nice feelings about the first kiss. Thank you for your comment about my poem 'Gentle Touch'. (Report) Reply

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  • Pradip Chattopadhyay (8/22/2013 12:09:00 PM)

    Wraps us in this present
    Moment of perfection

    loved this poem, Ralph. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, August 23, 2013

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