###### First Kiss(For W) Poem by Dee Wright

###### First Kiss(For W)

Rating: 3.1


She leans against
the window

to cool herself

breathes upon the glass
to calm herself

& with a fingertip
writes: “Help! ”

And then once again
erases it with her breath

but it still shows through
like a ghost of itself.

She longs again
to look into his eyes

& finds she can’t
look him in the eye.

“Is this love? ”
she asks herself

as if she had forgotten
her line

& had to prompt herself
as he continues talking

not realising

the drama
that is being

enacted within her
self.

She closes
the curtains

lights
candles

& promises her self
she will kiss him

...now!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 06 May 2008

Beautiful! You painted the picture perfectly. Lucky you... HG: -) xx

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Onelia Avelar 03 May 2008

breathes upon the glass / to calm herself / & with a fingertip / writes: “Help! ”...i like this lines very much - they add a dose of suspense

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Jerry Hughes 29 April 2008

A sweet, naive, uncomplecated expression of young love. Bliss!

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