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Jason Atkinson

(January 11,1984 / San Jose)

First Love


We never forget we just refuse to remember
Our first love and all the time that we spent together
To know is to be intimate I knew you in love
They say time is infinite yet it stopped with your tug
My hearts desire is still to be with you forever
Through the spirit of your Son my life is what I render
Although in the future, it will come to pass
Wrapped in the arms of my first love at the gates of everlast

Submitted: Sunday, October 20, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, October 22, 2013

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God is our first Love yet sometimes not remembered

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  • Khairul Ahsan (10/20/2013 10:59:00 PM)

    'Although in the future, it will come to pass
    Wrapped in the arms of my first love at the gates of everlast'
    Indeed beautiful!
    You may like to read my poem 'My Friend' and say a few words. (Report) Reply

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