First Time (My Scariest Childhood Memory) Poem by Mary Naylor

First Time (My Scariest Childhood Memory)

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I don't know how high I
Was, but I was way up
There, clinging to a rafter.
Jump, Mary! Jump Mary,

JUMP! I looked down. WAY down!
My hands were slick with sweat.
My hot breath was gasping.
My cousins screamed, JUMP! JUMP!

My heart thudded and heaved.
I didn't jump, I fell.
Down, down, air all around.
I bounced in the hay.

I lay there for a minute.
My cousins looked awed.
I said, 'LET`'S DO IT AGAIN! '
They grinned and up we scampered.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 20 April 2008

You were a brave little girl, though you did not know it at the time. Thank you for sharing this small adventure with your readers. Captivating, Mary. Love, Sandra

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Meggie Gultiano 19 April 2008

A childhood memory that you have captured so beautifully..Thanks for sharing a bit of your childhood memories, Mary. Take care, i love you.. Meggie

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Alison Cassidy 19 April 2008

Mary this is delightful. Full of childish spirit and adventure. The terror, followed so quickly by the 'let's do it again.'. Reminds me of my first time on the Big Dipper at Luna park. I was such a wimp, but once I'd conquered my fear, no one could stop me. You capture childhood beautifully in this charming write. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Mary Naylor

Mary Naylor

Chicago, Illinois
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