Karnail Singh Heirwale

Rookie (28th june,1933 / Heir distt Amritsar, Punjab, India)

Fishing - Poem by Karnail Singh Heirwale

FISHING

Fishing all the time
For you have been
Fished out
By crocodiles
Surrounding you
Layer upon layer
The circle
Encircles
You.

(karnailsingh Heranwale)


Comments about Fishing by Karnail Singh Heirwale

  • Rookie - 59 Points Brian Jani (5/17/2014 3:14:00 PM)

    Karnail Nicely layed down.it flows nicely.well done (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 6 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (6/30/2010 11:27:00 AM)

    Fished out
    By crocodiles
    Surrounding you
    Layer upon layer
    nice poem and mysterious.. expressions.. thank u.. write more. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 30, 2010



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