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A Fishy Tale

I saw you twice the other day
Stirring passion anew
It's easy saying just move on
Less easier to do

Ive always said to others
There's plenty more fish in the sea
But some days it makes no difference
How many fish there be

On the face of it, a small fish
But you took over my whole sea
Never before had I gone fishing
It was all so new to me

You were someone that I longed for
I'd never felt like that before
Some months on, now I'm seeing
The sea has fish once more

But some days you're the only fish
Swimming in my sea
And the fervor that you stirred in me
Will forever be

Submitted: Friday, June 17, 2011
Edited: Friday, June 17, 2011


Comments about this poem (A Fishy Tale by vanessa hughes )

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  • John Brown (11/10/2012 7:08:00 AM)

    Good poem Vanessa, and yes, it's a mighty big sea out there.

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  • Indranil Bhaduri (9/19/2012 12:33:00 AM)

    Brilliant...could relate to it in a big way.. Thank you so much for gifting this wonderful piece.

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  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/9/2012 1:37:00 PM)

    Some tales are fishy and it pains to recollect-better forget them to become better individual through karmic resolutions

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  • Adeline Foster (8/9/2012 4:21:00 PM)

    You have handled the concept in a truly imaginative way. Read mine – O Dearest Love –
    Adeline

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  • Alice Butler (7/24/2012 4:14:00 AM)

    This is brilliant. Everyone will love this!

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  • Prakhar Mishra (6/25/2012 4:42:00 AM)

    anybody will like the way you've written this one.............. sincerely i loved it and thought about my life as well

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  • Sonya Khan (5/28/2012 7:34:00 AM)

    That was a fantastic poem, I can really relate to it!

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  • Mukta Sawant (5/25/2012 7:11:00 AM)

    I liked your sentence making skill.

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  • Ebi Robert (5/14/2012 9:29:00 AM)

    The way you did the writing and the flow in line and verses makes this outstanding! I am impressed!

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  • Zubayer Zakir Khan (4/6/2012 1:38:00 PM)

    A fishy tale indeed, this is well-written and I liked the flow of the whole poem. Great work =)

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