Fog Poem by Barry Middleton

Fog

Rating: 5.0


it comes to soften the glare
as it drifts in from the bay

it unites the sky and sea
it intends to teach a lesson
...
too much noise and light
confuse the fragile senses

so that the mind must reel
from imaginary conviction
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the fog creates uncertainty
it disguises every belief

it paints with shadowy hue
the arrogant and pompous
...
armored in a healthy doubt
hides essential muted truth

the elusive gift of love
the obscurity of brotherhood

Fog
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 28 February 2016

Last two lines took it to a different level, SUPERB POEM.....Beyond ratings yet a maximum for this poem.

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Barry Middleton 28 February 2016

Thank you very much. You get it.

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