If, on this night so dark and dreary
You find yourself depressed and weary
And contemplate the various ways
That you might end it all...
Please...DON’T!
For I have seen those left behind
Nearly lose their mind...
From grief!
And it’s not a pretty sight! !
They torment themselves...
With...
What could have been...
Who it should have been...
What they might have done...
Why they didn’t see...
How they could have stopped it
If they had only known...
And on and on it goes
They wake each day to the same routine
Of sorting out facts...
Trying to make sense...
Trying to be brave...
Trying to go on...
And on and on it goes...
And you thought that YOU were living in Hell! !
Dee Daffodil (HW) 22 August,2009
Kudos for this message, humanely and rhythmically stated. -chuck
Wondeful poem Dee. Full of passion and heartfelt sympathy...and pain. Zen
thank you so much! ! i was really in a deep need to read such a supporting poem.. it has been added to MyPoemList.. nice & well written.. thanks again! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Aweinspiring poem with a great message, against suicidal tendencies. Fab rhyming. Pls review my latest poem too.