******** Footprints In The Sand Poem by Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan

******** Footprints In The Sand

Rating: 4.9


High tide
rushes in
erases my old footprints

leaving nothing
except fresh fine sand
for next foot printing

My journey
is like a shoreline sand

when trials come in
new high tide
rushes in

covering up
all wounded footprints

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rosalita Fernandez 04 June 2009

This is really good, i can truely relate its really good, i love it

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Ken E Hall 03 June 2009

We leave our mark and time heals the wounds but not the memory, the poem says more than it reads...thanks for the read regards uavanice1 +thanks

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Catrina Heart 03 June 2009

lovely metaphors written........washes all the pains away................10++++

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