For Elly Poem by ritty patnaik

For Elly



so soft,
like a whisper
she talks.
a breath of fresh air
in my jaded
and jejuned life.

she holds,
the candle of future,
my ever burried hopes
in the debris of
million thoughts
come up on the surface
when i see
her beaming face.

mysteriously ethical
contentedly happy,
with everlasting smile
making her world
a happy one,
as well as mine.

genuine and gentle
touch of hers,
concern for all
wins everybodys heart,
and mine too.
reassuring, is her smile
is the goodness of a pure heart

dear elly,
always stay this way
in our hearts.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarvesh Kulkarni 14 September 2009

A great dedication to a daughter-in-law. wonderful. felt really amazed reading this. 'she holds, the candle of future, my ever burried hopes in the debris of million thoughts come up on the surface when i see her beaming face.' Awesome. thank you.

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Raj Nandy 05 September 2009

A lovely dedication to dear Elly! She must be your daughter with a rhyming name! -Raj

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Ejaz Khan 05 September 2009

You are amazing Ritty, I must salute your positive attitude, which will never fail you. A lovely write!

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