For Jovial Poem by dipak adhya

For Jovial

Rating: 4.5


The sorrows were born
Out of my wounds
And the wounds were
As pierce as needles,
Surprisingly now I am freed from all pains
And my dullness
Makes others irritating...
And I can't help it

Now, when there is your connivance
I think of the first day
Oh! A blunt needle just gives me a chuckle
When you insult me
I feel another cackle
And then...

The sorrows were born
Out of my wounds
But I was not
I look for happines and love
That is abundantly scattered
And all the time stooping forward
I collect them all.

Tuesday, November 3, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: delight
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 04 November 2020

'I look for happines and love That is abundantly scattered And all the time stooping forward I collect them all.' - Loved these concluding lines! If I may suggest, I think a better caption of the poem would be, 'Sorrows Born Out of Wounds'.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 November 2020

A well written piece. Truly splendid....5 stars *****

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