Forgot, He'd A Soul Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Forgot, He'd A Soul

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Hitting life's golf holes,
Struggling to score vague goals,
Forgot, he'd a soul.
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Haiku |02.10.2017 |

Friday, February 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life,soul,goals
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 17 February 2019

life has golf hole! // outstanding thought

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 February 2019

I must thank you Mahtab Bangalee, you have really taken trouble to read many of my poems and, what is important, give feedback.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 February 2019

Score, core, ore! Struggling along the line. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 February 2019

Score, core, ore! Yes, yes, and deeper still there lies one's soul. But a look within seems harder. Thank you Edward Louis.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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