Gregory PierreJerome


It’s an illusion to some but in fact authenticity to all

A choice incurable or beautiful, simply a foul call

It brings joy and peace as lost and sleep

Free will, the ultimate gift

The very power that proves God existence

We in fact are not just creations but instead His children

He is the Alpha and Omega, the One and Only

Comical how we are the breed in between

Do you now see how we know good and evil?

He created both as of a test allowing free will

A delusional enslavement that causes to kill

Are we controlled robots or chaotic humans

Why the anarchy just open the eyes of your heart

Look around it’s an exam scored on the big day

Your soul is on the line, will you pass or fail

Again a decision, a will to choose freely

A choice to be made, man above God or God above man

Are we truly enslaved to the Bible?

Instead the master is brutal the fatal free will, sin

When we realize the facts, the effect is to blame

Yes, the father of lie exists, but does not free will

So why sin in shame and deny the rules of the game

To you it’s a joke, His just trying to control

In fact you control, down or up! Come on lets be real!

An officer on the road in a deep patrol

Fire alarm set but nowhere to roll

Cannot be dropped for you are already fallen

Life is tough isn’t, religion a reality, your head swollen

Demons fighting, your inheritance stolen

The more you rebel, the angrier you get

In fact death is here, free will, you’ve already met

Truth is souls are suffering, some rejoicing

Why! All based on a choice yours freely to take

A preacher preaches; a teacher teaches

You my friend freely decide to learn and earn

Its coming back isn’t it, the will to burn

As for me I prefer the Word of the Lord, my GOD, peace confirmed

A Book given, rules to follow, self righteousness to term

Free will, just a test and God’s worldly given attribute

Use it wisely, be safe and listen to learn

We are not robots, but humans a beautiful plantation

We are His children not just a creation

So let us wipe away His tears and give some appreciation

Submitted: Tuesday, June 01, 2010

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  • Rookie Summer Holst (6/19/2010 2:04:00 PM)

    Free will is definately a gift and people wont realize how special it is until they dont have it. It is our chioces that make us who we are and affect not only us but the people around us. very good poem i loved it :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Darrin Mcmiller Jr. (6/14/2010 12:57:00 PM)

    This was nice, my favorite lines 'Are we controlled robots or chaotic humans...
    Look around it’s an exam scored on the big day/Your soul is on the line, will you pass or fail'. That's a good debate, free will, surely we choose our own path's but are our path's already written? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (6/14/2010 12:40:00 PM)

    We have free will of chioce. It is what we choose that makes the difference. Hopefully we choose the perfect will of God. Being guided by the Parakletos{The One who walks beside us}, will lead us into all truth. Another wonderful, thoughtful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (6/7/2010 11:24:00 AM)

    [use it wisely...listen to lear.n.]--interesting view of free will/vividly set (Report) Reply

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