Let's sing the freedom song
Along the road of dogma littered dust
Footsteps cracking traditional crust
Steel emerging from the rust
Let's blow the freedom whistle
With the air that's free of smoke
A spirit that grows with every stroke of the clock
Let's lead a life that breaks free
Like a leaf leaving throes of tree
Cliches, practices and old thoughts
Beyond what we seek and what we sought
Let's breathe freedom on this day
New sunshine and a sunny day
New foundations, new castles
Dreams meant for only a few
Wish Happy independence day to you
A very positive write. Your second stanza is especially stirring and gallant. I hope there will be many happy returns of your Independence Day. Best regards, Sandra
Yes! Good, positive writing. Freedom is such a powerful word. Freedom is such a beautiful way. DC
Those who had been in chains, have been tortured and imprisoned fighting for freedom and independence, knew what was meant by the word 'freedom'! Our generations know only the dictionary meaning! 10! -Raj Nandy
Let's lead a life that breaks free Like a leaf leaving throes of tree .... first of all happy independence day and cheers to your freedom! Please don't despair...kepp burning the diya of hope; peace for all. Rehana 15th August,2009 London, UK
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
reading this is like a brisk march past...befitting rhythm!