From My Heart Poem by Kiersten Reilly

From My Heart

Rating: 4.8


How could such a beautiful soul,
Be so missunderstood?
Dealing with family who mistreats you,
Dealing with more than you ever could.

I think of you so highly,
But you low self esteem believes,
All I'm doing is being nice,
But to you I can't decieve.

So hen you hear the bad things,
Simply block them out,
The good things are all that matter,
not your families doubt.

So when I say 'you're beautiful',
Or tell you that you're smart,
These words are not my spoken mind,
They come straight from my heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lawrence S. Pertillar 01 August 2005

Hi Kiersten! I like this a lot! it's nice! Suggestion: check the spelling of 'misunderstood'...'But your low self esteem...' (check the your) ..Now, 'So 'hen'? ? did you mean 'when'...I hope so. It makes for a better read if you did! Nice work. LSP

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