Gandmi (Urdu) Poem by Jazib Kamalvi

Gandmi (Urdu)

Men to kehne par hun qadir un kahi keh loon tujhe.
Tu kahe to ibn e adam admi keh loon tujhe.

Naar ka masjood tu he noor ka masjood tu.
Ay farozan nafs e khaki roshni keh loon tujhe.

Daana e gandam k peeche dodne waale bata.
Saya e gandam kahoon ya gandmi keh loon tujhe.

Gandmi (Urdu)
Sunday, May 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: education,philosophy,wisdom
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
An educational poem recited at farewell party of intermediate class 2019.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jagdish Singh Ramána 28 November 2020

! زبردست! کیا لکھ دیا آپنے سر

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 May 2019

Your last two poems in Urdu. They look excellent poetry, but some words fly above my head. Now I have a suggestion if you agree- all Urdu writers in fact, (1) if you can give meanings of some key words, (2) if the poem be given in Hindi fonts, Devanagari I mean. It would reach larger readership, and also educative. Thank you.

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 May 2019

Un kahi=to say something unpleasant. Naar=fire or satan. Noor=light or angels. Masjood=to whom someone bows. Farozan=enlightened. Thanks for your sincerity.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 May 2019

UR TWO POEMS IN RECENT DAYS BOTH URDUS HAVE DOUBLE MEANING TITLES KEEP REQUESTING ALL TO READ THE LUSTY AND BE ON THE WORLD'S PANEL AS FIRSTY YOUR BESTY

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Jazib Kamalvi 21 May 2019

Dear Poet! I am grateful for your continuous support.

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