^^gates^of^hell^^ Poem by joshua daukei

^^gates^of^hell^^

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My skin is cold my lips are blue
A feeling that my life is through
And my body lies so stiff and pail
Then he comes to drag me to hell
I do not fight that I knew would come
So I do not turn and try to run
I turn and take the reapers hand
He leads me off to the waste land
Where nothing lives but nothing dies
And all you hear are lonely cries
Before I knew it I was there
At the gates of fire and fear
The gates of hell where so so near
Then a flash and my life comes back
Hearing sound of a line so flat
Then a shock and my heart beats back
I gasp for air and look around
I see no flames and no reaper near
I hear a whisper it sounds so clear
Now you know now you've seen
That your soul will belong to me
So straighten up do things right
Or i might come to you at night

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
loNeLY AnGel 14 April 2010

nice poem...... i like it

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Goran Gustafsson 02 April 2010

A premonition, spooky, isn't it. Nice writing Josh.

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Muhammad Ali 11 May 2009

I am amazed........ good work Josh! ! 10.. Ali

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