God Poem by Kareem Abdulrahim

God



God...
You're
the One
that
Left us.
Drowning
in
a sea
of
Prosthetic Limbs
&
Rotting Flesh...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kristin E. Johnson 03 March 2005

This is an interesting work. It left me wanting a bit more information to help me connect with the image of the prosthetic limbs, etc. Is this a reference to a particular event in history or literature? The only thing I can think of that comes close to that image is the episode of M*A*S*H where all the main characters were having nightmares. It is a little bit like Hawkeye's nightmare, but it is different enough from your image that I wouldn't venture a connection. Have you thought of adding a bit more information?

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