Down, down, down
There is no end,
It is an elevator that won’t rise,
As it gets hotter,
It eats you inside out
Burning, burning, burning
You feel hollow,
As you get deeper
It gets harder to look up,
Voices call down to you,
But it gets harder to hear,
You start to wonder,
You start to question,
But it’s all too late,
There is nothing left…
Very often i feel this way, but i don't think that i can get into words the same u did Listen to the song called (The unnamed feeling) it's for Metallica it talks also about this feeling that u don't know and that breaks humans down, it will inspire u to write more lovely poems, TC XXXXXXXX
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I would like to translate this poem
very interesting. enjoyed it