Good Bye My Love Poem by Ancita Michael

Good Bye My Love

Rating: 2.5


Days turned into a week
And weeks into years.
You let my eyes seek,
For your love my dear.

Strange did I feel but yet so comfortable with this deal,
Sitting in two incompatible corners of the world sharing a meal.

Waiting, heart filled with colorful dream and hopeful eye,
Now to think all is wasted and I am firm on saying Goodbye,
Once and forever to the reverie long awaited with a sigh.

Hard for me is to believe
That there is an eerie end
Feeling good about relation relieve
Without a need for anything to be mend

It ain't your mistake nor is it mine
just when together things aren't fine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 25 October 2012

Strong stance nicely written in melodious verses Excellent poem

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Lyn Paul 25 October 2012

Great writing Ancita, a story told from beginning to end. Thank you

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Yash Shinde 25 October 2012

very beautifully written describes your condition well.........very well written with great rhyming scheme :)

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