Greetings Poem by bakuli bhakali

Greetings

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Blow the Gong
Alarm the people
They must rise to see the shining sun
He is here travelling the dark
Just to say us
A very good morrow

Ring the bell
Alarm the people
Nightingales are here
They must wake up to see them singing
They’re here to wish
A very happy spring

Thursday, November 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Randhir Kaur 13 May 2016

They must rise to see the shining sun They must wake up to see them singing.... Beautiful... well written..

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 08 December 2015

Verily, a lovely poem on the lovely season

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Manonton Dalan 26 November 2015

a very happy spring...truly is (I could skip winter if I may) .

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Bakuli Bhakali 26 November 2015

ya... spring is full of life whereas winter is cold. thanks for reading my poem

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