Guest On The Smoke Billow, The Vast Mind Poem by Luo Zhihai

Guest On The Smoke Billow, The Vast Mind

心思浩渺烟波客

出句:
心思浩渺烟波客【不正师太】
对句:
才气云集广袤时【不正师太】
才气过人集锦时【笙箫默】
梦意涟漪诗酒人【幸天游(墨韵经年)】

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行迹稚拙?世道囚【Denis Mair】
魂魄空寂?鬼影人【天山白雪】

注:Denis Mair 先生是住在北京的外国人。

Thursday, April 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,mind,people,time,wine
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 01 June 2016

I see that you posted this line with several replies on CHINA POESY. I notice that you put a question mark in the middle of my reply, probably because of a flaw in my language. Yes, I'm afraid that the lines I write in Chinese have flaws. I freely admit it!

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Denis Mair 08 April 2016

行迹稚拙世道囚 (The first line is good, both in Chinese and English! )

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Luo Zhihai 01 June 2016

谢谢你的对句。 Thank you for your sentence.

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Haifeng / Shanwei / Guangdong / China
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