Nice try, I am happy to see you have learned the format 5-7-5 syllable but try and avoid your own interpretation such as the emotional cloud.....A cloud can never be emotional....instead you can say Floating/ flowing cloud....
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Nice try, I am happy to see you have learned the format 5-7-5 syllable but try and avoid your own interpretation such as the emotional cloud.....A cloud can never be emotional....instead you can say Floating/ flowing cloud....