*haiku: Skies White And Heavy Poem by Isaiah Grey

*haiku: Skies White And Heavy

Rating: 2.8


skies white and heavy
a dragonfly wonders
where is summer?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Bowen 26 May 2009

Isaiah, nice haiku. Might be better with another sylable in the last line 5-7-5...'where is his/her summer'. Love the idea behind your haiku. Regards, Ian

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Anjali Sinha 10 May 2009

a lovely summer haiku yeah wheres it? maybe an illusion or a mirage maybeeee whatever a lovely haiku -10 anjali

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Estrella Baldemosa 09 May 2009

a lovely haiku...10 plus

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