Haikus Of Sadness Poem by Zulfiqar Ali Bhatti

Haikus Of Sadness



Spring's breezes gently pass
On the Indus bank
You are not with me, alas!

Autumn deserted look wears
You in my mind
And in my eyes tears!

Parting summer days
I, lonely think
Why this life's phase?

Sunday, May 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,desire,loneliness,remembrance,tears
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 01 June 2016

If you keep feeling it, maybe you have to find something that make u feel content the more you think the more u feel...otherwise you can just change the way you thinl The haikus you wrote just good as the emotional almost like ours (for readers to feel) Keep it up and be happy.... try to be one

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