Have A Look Poem by Fatima Obaid

Have A Look

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knock knock knock
never ever mock
for it converts
the soft into rock
stop stop stop
don't look back
for its harshness will never;
let you live in now
drop drop drop
slowly leave the ego
and please let it go
for it destroys the purest love
crop crop crop
the people who hurt you
for you are not made to hurt
add people who love you
lock lock lock
'the evil' lying inside of you
who every time encourages you
to do wrong and wrong
block block block
the ways of hatred
clearing the ways of love
fall in the valley of it
stand stand stand
for your thoughts and ideas
for your freedom and comfort
after the fall you should stand

Wednesday, October 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 09 November 2015

Great write.......In rhythm, Loved it.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 24 October 2015

Read read read, I shall again read, To enlighten me, Again again again, So so so, I add the poem, To my poem list A lovely poem, A great write, Loved reading it Be blessed......10

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