Haven’t we all waned
Milked our mother and soothe starve
Haven’t we all witnessed the sun drift away
And usher in the moon
What men, but
Oscillatory fate
Haven’t we all with baby steps passed through hilly yesterday to this age
Haven’t we all landed in the port of happiness
and for once smelt heaven, because end is the
beginning of our journey
Haven’t we all
In the voyage of sleep
On the wing of the world roved in heaven
Haven’t we all been lured by worldly vamps
slipped into the vault of sadness, shrouded by
pain and hope cob-webbed, then come calming
words and patience, and
Our evaporated hope ventilated
Haven’t we all got stainless heart, and then was
rusted by illusive diamond because we disco in discomfort
Haven’t we all.
A piece with fine expression of an insight that suggest a question asking man if at all he ever learns from nature and life.
Very nice imagination...you are open minded...the poem has a lotta wonderfull expressions...and i don't think there are noticable mistakes...not at all..an amazing expressive piece...you are a very good writer =)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautifully said liked your style, language and the idea... very nice cheers