Hawk Eyes......The Pigeon Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Hawk Eyes......The Pigeon

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How unsafe this world is
For women and children
Which is surrounded by
Liars, cheats, traitors
Waiting to feast on
Keeping but hawk eyes always
To eat the pigeons
Like gluttons, misers,
Envious and ambitious
Who could protect and shield
The helpless, creatures..?

Monday, April 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: ambiguity
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Helpless creatures
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 18 April 2016

Pungent poem on prevailing situation of the society. You nailed it with this short yet powerful poem. It is like bunny in the core forest with carnivores all around.10+++

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Beautiful, ur lines, enhance it still, thanks dear, you youngsters can do wonders, take care

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Akhil Raveendran 18 April 2016

protect your self is the best thing... evil kingdom and there outcome with negative effect .. we are strong.. try become stronger...

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Thanks for the support for self help, but children are the easy target, ofcourse women however we try to defend our self, we are victims, thanks again

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