they sat there
their eyes seeing far
into the blue sky
and the sea below
he, in his several worlds
she, in his world
21oct2009
15.47hrs
'He, in his several worlds she, in his world' Rachel Ann Butler
An interesting observation of a woman in a relationship with a man who is busy in so many different areas. Times are a changing and we may see less and less of this I believe. Loved the simple format and imagery of the eyes, blue sky and sea.......10 Karin
Omnipresence below up behind forward and on Ms. Nivedita Ten++ UK Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv
a beautiful poem describing the relation between man n woman....shall i say, around two decades back? ....and i dont think it holds good at present; as both are in competition for one upmanship, hence, both are too occupied in their own worlds...right, poet? ? ?
NOW A DAYS EVEN THE SHE HAS HER SEVERAL WORLDS...LOVELY
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The Natural Difference in perspective. Well expressed.