He Broke Me Poem by Collette Y Anderson Williams

He Broke Me

Rating: 4.3


Slowly,
skillfully,
deceitfully,
he broke me...
No, I allowed him
to break me.
Repeatedly.
He knew what he was doing,
still, his cold, cruel heart
remained unmoved.

But in the face of his constant,
subtle abuses,
I am learning the art of stoicism.
I am loosening the chain -
link by link,
granting myself the free rein
to run, to exhale, to smile,
to live by my design...
No, to live by His design!

Oh, yes!
I am running free:
for he is no longer allowed
to break me.

He Broke Me
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Run free!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

An extraordinary poem of extraordinary will and hard-earned endurance. Loved the poem. Enjoyed reading. Most happy to follow you, dear poet.

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Thank you, Unnikrishnan.

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Richard Wlodarski 18 May 2022

Abuse of any sort should never be tolerated. And as human beings, we must find a way to end this seemingly never ending cycle. I applaud, and totally respect you, Collette for having the courage to write this extraordinary poem. It is one that is truly worthy of POD!

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Jayne Davies 16 May 2022

Great poem! Congratulations on POD x

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Chinedu Dike 15 May 2022

A concise and insightful verse written from the heart. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched....

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Thank you for you kind comment, Chinedu..

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I had posted my observations on the poem here. But they don't appear yet. PoemHunter is playing truant again….

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I think you should rename the poem "I Broke Free"….

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Thank you for your comment, Unnikrishnan. However, the title was intentional.

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