He That Strives, Triumphs Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

He That Strives, Triumphs

Rating: 5.0


Whatso one wishes from whatso shore,
Whatso goal, if prayed from deepest pore,
Pursued reverting not,
Dotting each single dot,
He that strives sure would get— he so sure.
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Words well said | 41.11.14 |

Tuesday, July 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: work
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
If you wish something from your deepest core, and work hard for it, the destiny helps you to triumph.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 31 July 2019

Fortune favors the brave is the great embodied message in this witty Limerick sir! A significant short work....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 July 2019

You have a point too, but the point here is: if your wish comes from deep, if you are prepared to pursue to the hilt, the cosmic will contrives to make your wish come true. Thanks for your rating Dr Swain

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 July 2019

Core, shore, more! From the deepest pore. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 July 2019

No, I think sharing comes easy here, the key is in reading, so thanks indeed.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 July 2019

reading your poetry is like licking fingers even after the honey in one's mouth lingers Yes you said my comments are longer but some one has to compensate for the weaker s

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 July 2019

No, it is no weakness I like it. Like it because I am very laconic in words both writing and speaking. And sometimes the silence becomes unbearable and I need a person like you, so welcome, PP

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 July 2019

He that strives sure would get— he so sure. ___....Oh, yes, so sure. If one wish something from his deepest core, and work hard for it, the destiny helps him to triumph. Brilliant work sir.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 July 2019

Thank you for thinking alike endorsing what the poem said.

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