Her Smile Poem by Satheesan Rangorath

Her Smile

Rating: 3.0


Her cry slowly turned feeble.
merged into blasting chaos.
I still see her faded sad smile,
hiding in a dropp of her tear,
yet to drip from eyelids.

Monsoon clouds stand still,
as hopes of rain still alive.
Heat waves had drained blood,
Earth sighs with cracked lips,
as Frogs start crocking “pekrom”.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 23 June 2008

monsoon commencing slow...a good poetic picturisation...'pekrom' gives a special effect to the poem...10

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Satheesan Rangorath

Satheesan Rangorath

Elappulli, Palakkad, Kerala, India
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