Hidden Poem by Jane Tomlin

Hidden

Rating: 4.8


My First Poem

I feel abandoned, alone and helpless
I am misunderstood by so many people
Nobody knows how I feel and they never will
My future is locked away in silence.

As I search within myself to find the key
I tell myself I will never be forgotten
But the lonely days roll on and I think to myself
Will this torture never end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina PrettyBrownEyes 01 March 2005

haunting and sad. pretty good for a first poem

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