High Dive - Haiku Poem by Seema Jayaraman

High Dive - Haiku

Rating: 5.0


leisurely paddle
Pool of lapis lazuli
splash - high dive
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Copyright ©Seema Jayaraman, Mumbai 1Nov2015 All Rights Reserved

Sunday, November 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: swimming
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
captured our typical swimming pool experiences, a leisurely lazy paddle when disrupted by a serious splash from a high diver.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 01 November 2015

Wonderful dive haiku shared here with interesting sense. Really very interesting sharing done here....10

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Seema Jayaraman 01 November 2015

Thank you Kumarmaniji, this was a light attempt based on some experiences at the pool.. request your attention to a poem I posted yday against a serious social crime Human and Child Trafficking titled All Trussed Up - Packaged for Delivery (Against Human Trafficking) . thanks.

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