High Earning Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE
High Earning
There silent souls
Slowly goals earn
Where fools can't reach
-03.12.2020 Chattogram
The Than-Bauk is a Burmese form with very simple rules: Three lines. Four syllables per line. The final syllable of the first line rhymes with the third syllable of the second line and second syllable of the third line.
don't cry this is complicated u smile all the while lovely boy now fit the syllables and enjoy ThereXXX silent souls//// their silent sole Slowly goals earn................Slowly EARN goal Where fools can't reach.......where fools only reach
Very unique style of writing. Thanks for introducing to the new form of writing- Than-Bauk.5****
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5/18/2024 6:25:51 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Thanks for the 'Poet's Notes'. This is the first time I have come across a 'Than-Bauk', a Burmese form of haiku or senryu. 5 Stars***** for this great effort!