Him Poem by sharayah Hodson

Him

Rating: 5.0


The thoughts of you cloud my pain and brings the part that seems sane in me out. The moments you held me are the ones I laugh about, while I weep when you leave. This may seem weird but I’m in deep for the edge of your love. I am waiting for the right moment to show you the feeling I hold. See but I am scared to share it for I have not only been hurt once but many and that is not my enemy but the result of the ending. I don’t know how to explain how I feel just that it seems so real. And I hope you will help me heal as I promise to do for you. I trust you to see what I want to be and except it for the simple fact is we both need it. I just hope you will be it that everything I need cause I am done with being the strong one and I need a rock. So what do you say to the position if not I will be still.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adam Rubenstein 29 January 2007

that was amazing, you know sometimes I wish my ex would have said that to me before she ran, she just isn't a strong person, and unfortunately, I tried to go to her and show her that I was going to be there for her no matter what, but she didnt want me to help.... instead she 'needs to do it on her own' you know it's amazing what you would do for someone just so they wouldnt feel pain, but whats even more amazing is when they dont want you to. anyway great poem, spoken word. I really enjoyed it.

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