Kolitha Lelwala

His Love To Her - Poem by Kolitha Lelwala

His love towards her
just like nibbling an unripe mangoe
watering mouths of the audience
but making his teeth benumb.

Comments about His Love To Her by Kolitha Lelwala

  • Rookie - 13 Points Onelia Avelar (1/12/2009 5:46:00 AM)

    Wow, the love seen like 'nibbling an unripe mangoe' what a wonderful delicious metaphor! I have never read such a sweet simile for one's love to someone. Bravo! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (1/1/2009 4:14:00 PM)

    You say little to say much. Very unique imagery.

    Kind regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,595 Points Sadiqullah Khan (1/1/2009 12:14:00 AM)

    true but if it is for the audience, , ,10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ppp sss (12/31/2008 8:02:00 AM)

    It's amazing how short as this piece is, the words make me very aware of my mouth, almost a puckering. I find this a unique sensation. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 24, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 24, 2008

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