Changez Ndzai


Hold Your Breath!


Be patient and never complain,
For day will come with no bargain,
Despite of all this burning pain,
That fire will be stopped by rain.

Don't let furry to close your curtain,
Hold your breath and climb the mountain,
Keep that same speed and maintain,
Manage it by using much of your brain.

Don't let ego to destroy your gain,
Think twice before you do things again,
Since life is bitter wide and plain,
If not careful in suffer will remain.

Let determination in your life pertain,
All the good tricks in life keep train,
Since success after all will reign,
And your effort wont be invain.

Submitted: Friday, August 08, 2014
Edited: Friday, August 08, 2014

Topic of this poem: life

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Its a poem gives morale to hustlers.

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