Home To Me Poem by Srishty Shaleen

Home To Me

Rating: 4.0


I return to you
I return home
all things i'd left behind
I return from war
Wher my life was all confined...

I'm no more a warrior
I m a mere girl
who sits here and waits all day...
For u 2 do ur chores
nd come around home to me
and say all one has to say...

Life goes on
It doesnt really end
it's been going on and it will
but mine wud lose all its warmth
once u went away...

I cant stand 2 see
you drifting you this way...
that u most surely are...
i cant do nothing
i can only weep nd wish upon evry star...

If only i hadnt jumped
If only i hadnt lost
If only i'd kept my head
.....
I might not hav known these
dreams
I might not hav known
pure love
but then my wrists wont be stained red.....

p.s. readers please do leav me comments....this is da 1st poem i'm posting...i'v been riting 4 years....but posting a creation 4 all 2 see takes enormous courage, , , , pls...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

second and fourth line of the fourth stanza seems wrong... the poem was expressed wonderfully with a lot of grammatical errors... made some corrections second line of the second stanza 'who SIT here and WAIT all the day/ who sit here and wait all days/daily' u can choose any one fifth line of the third stanza will be 'once u GO away'

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