(writter lyric) egi david perdana (17 december 1989 / indonesia)

What do you think this poem is about?

hope

hope........
hope.......
hope.......
I hope
I hope you smile
I hope You never cry
I hope you happy
I hope your get you dream
I hope you better than yesterday
I hope you respon to my love
I hope you love me do
I hope you always remember me my girl
remember me remember me remember me remember me
and please smile
please
smile smile smile smile smile smile smile smile smile smile
smile smile smile smile smile smile smile smile smile smile
smile smile smile smile smile smile smile smile smile smile
smile smile smile smile smile smile smile smile smile smile
I hope you smile and happy
and I hope
I hope I hope I hope I hope I hope I hope I hope
I hope I hope I hope I hope I hope I hope I hope
I hope I hope I hope I hope I hope I hope I hope
I hope I hope I hope I hope I hope I hope I hope
you love me you love me you love me you love me
and please
keep my hand and your smile look my face
and we life together and you smile and you happy
you happy I hope I hope I hope I hope I hope I hope I hope
forever us together
forever forever forever and forever
I love you

(writter lyric) egi david perdana
Submitted: Monday, January 14, 2008

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  • Nice Pinky (11/29/2011 9:43:00 AM)

    It sounds like an echo of the words, , =D, , Nice..

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  • Foqia Zafar (9/14/2009 4:19:00 AM)

    Such beautiful words =)

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  • Donald Foster (8/3/2009 3:52:00 PM)

    Egi, my friend, too much repetition, its like shouting that hides the beauty of a voice.

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  • Virginie Yargeau (6/18/2009 12:37:00 PM)

    lol. poetry holds such mystery, but if a guy ever wrote this to me i would smile so much! this is amazing! the repetition makes u sound even more determined to love her and show it to her, and prove it. defenitely good.

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  • Christian Guice (3/4/2009 9:59:00 AM)

    i really like this poem amazing if u ask me nice skills i had to reveal

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  • Arhoz Anvi (10/4/2008 4:12:00 AM)

    really nice to read something different, :)

    keep writing,
    Arhozie
    strawberry flavors

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (9/23/2008 6:00:00 AM)

    nice experiment with new genre...... and poetry allows such elasticity as the mind itself..fine

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  • Secret Yellow Rock Chic (6/23/2008 11:44:00 PM)

    whats with the repitition? too much!

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  • Geovanni Leaño (4/17/2008 2:31:00 AM)

    hope...

    The repetitions can add color to a poem Britanny M, one way to really understand is to know the author of the poem's nackground...
    To the author, nice poem... It's just that I HOPE your love for this someone will never be spoiled by at least a hairstrand of EXPECTAION...

    keep writing!
    -GanNi

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  • Kesav Easwaran (4/17/2008 1:45:00 AM)

    a triangular poem. you...her...and a bundle of emotional words!

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