Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Gold Star - 5,723 Points (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Hope - Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Alone we walked and in pain
As blade or thorn shall twist
Or loud the silence talked, refrained
And echoes in the mist
Born as angels sing, a light
Once on earth before remains
Peace His Love brings to night
As each new life is more, proclaims
His birth to shine as angels sing
As the universe sang the Birth
Long ago or this night brings
Each babe the hope of earth
As thorn or joy rebounds
His love on earth resounds.


Comments about Hope by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

  • Gold Star - 18,294 Points Ramesh Rai (9/14/2014 8:42:00 PM)

    Concluding lines are xlent.
    As the universe sang the Birth
    Long ago or this night brings
    Each babe the hope of earth
    As thorn or joy rebounds
    His love on earth resounds.
    Thanx for share. Regards. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 30,528 Points Valsa George (9/1/2014 1:06:00 AM)

    In the misty night, when the world shivered in chill and despondency, angels sang of peace and joy and the world rejoiced over the birth of Light! The song of peace and hope those angels sang rebounds leaving beautiful echoes! A lovely write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Csdb Kind (5/27/2009 5:10:00 PM)

    i like your style. thank you.
    do you have the time? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raynette Eitel (5/17/2009 11:38:00 AM)

    Your meter and rhyme are perfect here, not intrusive but so musical. Your theme touches the soul. Raynette (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,478 Points James B. Earley (2/2/2009 10:26:00 PM)

    Hope - The essence of life itself! Excellent composition. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 29 Points Aiswarya. T.anish (10/9/2008 12:11:00 AM)

    Or loud the silence talked, refrained
    And echoes in the mist
    Born as angels sing, a light
    Once on earth before remains
    Peace His Love brings to night
    As each new life is more, proclaims
    His birth to shine as angels sing
    As the universe sang the Birth

    These line are wonderful. I liked the poem very much. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Qendresa Ulaj (9/17/2008 12:57:00 PM)

    i really like this one... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Prasetya Utama (9/15/2008 10:02:00 PM)

    Love and peace become more powerful words in line of poem. Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stephanie Fiddy (9/15/2008 8:44:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem! Very nice :) I like alot! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (9/15/2008 12:28:00 PM)

    a great descriptive write, profound in theme (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (9/14/2008 10:05:00 AM)

    nice
    silent night-holy night
    all is calm-all is bright
    reminds me of that hymn
    +10 regards anjali
    (Please do read and comment on my poems) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (9/13/2008 10:57:00 AM)

    A very nice poem,10 for it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Elle B (9/10/2008 1:04:00 PM)

    This is a wonderful poem. It has the magic and harmony that cannot be found everywhere. Thanks for sharing this amazing piece of work (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,154 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (9/8/2008 12:39:00 AM)

    On your poem Hope. You have pictured well about Hope. You may read mine 'hope ever alive. Also please read Helen of Troy as good as Cleopatra. Also 'A woman fortyplus aspires'. Thank you for your view on Cleopatra. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kris Smith (9/6/2008 1:11:00 PM)

    Hope is the seed that will give birth to a new world that we can all enjoy united in belief10 Chris (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 6, 2008



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