Hopes Poem by Rini Shibu

Hopes

Rating: 5.0


Hopes are given and taken away
Still you have to smile all the way
But never again let anyone play
Because you need to be happy everyday
Open the book for your page
Be ready to face life at any stage
Life is short so don't be sad
Wait for the change and don't get mad

Wednesday, January 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: people,society
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
The Crow 17 January 2018

You could have made the last two lines something like: Life's too short to sit and wait It all can change in a single day Or something like that and it would have rhymed better. Just a suggestion. Liked it.

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Robert Murray Smith 11 May 2018

Hope is the rain that falls on a dry gulch.

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Muzahidul Reza 29 January 2018

Hopes are given and taken away, excellent write, thanks for sharing,10

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Rini Shibu 29 January 2018

Thanks Reza! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 January 2018

Hopes are given and taken away Still you have to smile all the way.....Loved the expression Rini!

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Rini Shibu 19 January 2018

Thanks Dillip for your feedback Rini

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Lamar Cole 17 January 2018

A very delightful and inspiring poem.

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Rini Shibu 19 January 2018

Thank you so much lamar for finding time to read this poem

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 January 2018

A very inspiring and positive write. Great rhyme. Very well executed.10

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Rini Shibu 19 January 2018

Thanks Rose for reading and commenting

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