Horses For Courses Poem by Andy Brookes

Horses For Courses



The forth horse has me by the heels
the pale rider stares a ragged smile
cruelty is in the wind and lightening his spear
he said my name, is death and you're mine,
for I am the last.

Monday, August 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 06 September 2019

ok, you 'forced me' to read " Revelation 6: 1-8 King James Version (KJV) " , online. you've been readin' too many 'books'. ok, you may be in for trouble, but i see no mention of a " spear" . Britney? but in " ...my name, is death and your are mine" drop the comma, and either use " and you are" or " and you're" . i thought you were 'at the track/course', Ascot. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 06 September 2019

ok, you 'forced me' to read " Revelation 6: 1-8 King James Version (KJV) " , online. you've been readin' too many 'books'. ok, you may be in for trouble, but i see no mention of a " spear" . Britney? but in line " ...my name, is death and your are mine" drop the comma, and either use " and you are" or " and you're" . but i thought this would be about nags runnin' 'round a track/course! bri :)

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