Hounds-Κυνηγόσκυλα (Haiku) Poem by Kostas Lagos

Hounds-Κυνηγόσκυλα (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


Little fox!

There are many hounds

on this trail.



Αλεπουδίτσα!

Πολλά κυνηγόσκυλα

στο δρόμο αυτό.

Monday, March 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: animals,choice,danger
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 07 March 2018

Always you express your brilliance of perception in each poem. This is definitely an amazing poem very wisely penned...10

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Kostas Lagos 05 March 2018

Thanks Mihaela! I prefered a 3-5-3 version for the english to avoid writing too many words.Is there something wrong with the reply button or is it just my laptop?

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Mihaela Pirjol 05 March 2018

I first read the Greek version of this poem: it has all the substance of a rather senryu. Plus, all the 17 syllables there where they need to be- and not only- the juxtaposition is Perfect! - Telio!

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